Thursday, 19 September 2013

A fish out of water

SIMPLE BOOK REVIEW OUTLINE

INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH

1. Book Title and Author:A fish out of water
by helen palmer.
2. main idea of story:Don't over feed your pet fish.
3. Main characters in the book:Mr carp,otto the fish and the boy.
4. something unique interesting about the story/book for readers to know:If you overfeed your pet fish you will have problems.

BODY PARAGRAPH-PLOT

1. Main idea of the story /book:
A boy over feeds his fish and has to find a way to make his fish small again.
2. Where does the story take place:It starts at the pet shop.
3. When does the story take place:During One Whole  day.
4. Something unique about the time/place in which the story takes place and how it affects the characters:
It would be how the fish  grew so big that it had to use the public swimming pool.
BODY PARAGRAPH 2- CHARACTERS

1. Main characters of the story/book:
It is about a boy who buys fish from the pet shop
2. What are the relationships like between characters in the story/book:The boy and the fish are friends.
3. Does something important or meaningful to the story happen to a or between characters?Describe it in one sentence:The fish got over feed.

BODY PARAGRAPH 3-REVIEW

1. Favorite part of story/book and why:
When the house gets flooded because its funny.
2. What do you think about the way it was  written?
It has fluency.
3. Do you think other kids would enjoy reading this book and why?
Yes and i know why because it is really cool and nice to read.  

CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH

1. Was the story/book entertaining, educational, amusing,
and why?
entertaining because the fish got bigger and bigger.
2. Why did you enjoy/not enjoy reading this book?
The fact that we should never overfeed your fish
3. Would you recommend other kids to read  this book?
yes.

Sunday, 8 September 2013

the grand old tree.

This is a story about a grand old tree.
Once there was a grand old tree.
her roots sank deep into the earth,
her arms reached high into the sky.
She was home to meany creatures.
birds nested among her branches,
squirrels scurried through her leaves,
caterpillars and ladybugs crawled about.
The grand old tree flowered,
bore fruit,
and sowed seeds.
she had many children.
they changed the  landscape for miles  around,
perhaps  even farther than old tree knew.
the grand old tree lived a long , long time.
she basked in the sun ,
swayed in the breeze, and danced in the wind.
she grew  and shed...
many leaves.
at last, the grand old tree was very, very old.
her branches  no longer swayed and danced , but cracked and snaped in the wind.
finally she fall, and snow gently covered her.
the old tree died.
she no longer flowerd, bord fruit, or sowed seeds, but she was still home to meany creatures.
raccoons nest in  her trunk,
centipedes crawled along her brancheses and lichen grew on her bark.
the grand old tree slowly  crumbled. she became prart of the earth.
today the roots of her grandchildren sink deep into this earth.there arms reach hig in to the sky.
they are home to many creatures, just like the grand old tree. THE END.


Thursday, 5 September 2013

Monday, 2 September 2013

Maori parts of the body


This is my picture of me.

We are learning  about  Maori names for our  body.

It is hard to remember Maori names.


I know what your mouth is in Maori it is called waha your ears are called talingaes.


Wednesday, 28 August 2013

Paige's Art.

This is my Aboriginal art that I did for calendar art.
It took two weeks but I finally finished it.
I will tell you how i made it:
I had to  draw it first it wasnt hard drawing it but when you start painting it gets harder.
It is a flower.



Monday, 26 August 2013

Picture of my box!!!

This is steps of showing you how to make a box like this one.
steps

1.Get a piece of paper
2.Get a pen or a pencil
3.Start drawing your net
4.You will need scissors
5. Cut out your net
6.Then put your net together
7. YOU WILL NEED A RULER!!!!
8. now you are finished